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My world was small.

I was alone.

No one to call my own.

My heart has been broken.

It has been destroyed.

I felt used, abused, and incomplete.

I had no one.

But in my lonely, painful world of light,

which was too bright,

A darkness fell.

It brought the light down and I liked it.

I sought out the source.

A boy lonely as me.

He felt my pain.

He told me I brought light to him.

I said he brought darkness to me.

We knew it was meant to be.

And now I sit upon a throne of light, lonely no longer.

No more pain.

I have you, my king of darkness, my love.

You make me complete.
I written this to my boyfriend, :iconvenomsentinel209: because he written me one. He is my lovely darkness. Happy very early b-day love! :kiss:

I forgot to credit the pic. I didnt mean to use it without asking but i will. Pic is by :iconalexiuss: Sorry Alexiuss forgive me
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sonix22 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This was how I felt when I was little I felt so alone........abused.......mistreated........till I met my my friend,he understood me......you helped me too.
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww *huggle*
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sonix22 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
thank you....
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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sonix22 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
=3
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*huggle*
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sonix22 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
(Blushes,and hugs back)
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sup?
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TylerPinkston Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
A happy ending :) Light prevails.
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks X3
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NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:? it's you boy-friend's B-day!? Why didn't you tell me, what does he want 4 his B-day-cake?

Jest tell me:
* the color of the back-round.
* the color(s) of the cake.
* the # of layer(s) on it.
* if you want icing on it, and what color(s).
* if you want some sprinkles, and what color(s).
* if you want "(Happy B-day)" or other on it, and what color(s).
* Your deviant name or nickname.

And I will make it!

Please answer you order like this:
___ back-rond
___ cake
___ layers
___ icing
___ sprinkles
___ Happy B-day and/or “(other)”
___________

P.S. If you don’t want it, don’t write it, and specify if you want your name on the cake!
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wait wait wait XD It is a birthday present but it s a very early bday present. the birthday isnt until December 20
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NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok, but stell, what does he want 4 his B-day-cake?

Jest tell me:
* the color of the back-round.
* the color(s) of the cake.
* the # of layer(s) on it.
* if you want icing on it, and what color(s).
* if you want some sprinkles, and what color(s).
* if you want "(Happy B-day)" or other on it, and what color(s).
* Your deviant name or nickname.

And I will make it!

Please answer you order like this:
___ back-rond
___ cake
___ layers
___ icing
___ sprinkles
___ Happy B-day and/or “(other)”
___________

P.S. If you don’t want it, don’t write it, and specify if you want your name on the cake!
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ok hold on
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... and.. so.
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
he says no because he doesnt know you to well. :iconvenomsentinel209: boyfriend
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool
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alexiuss Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
if you're gonna use my picture please credit me
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oops sorry. I just found it on the internet. My bad
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fortifex Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Oh-oh... you are doomed! You've taken art from :iconalexiuss: without crediting him. He's the founder of :icondoombringers: therefore you should remove it instantly and never take art from others again or a shitstorm will haunt you profile... (This is not a threat, i just say to you what will happen^^').
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I didnt mean to. I was just looking for a pic. give me a moment
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samian0 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nicely done with the poem
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome picture and it fits together with the poem perfectly. Brilliant, beautiful.
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much Appa.
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fortifex Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Picture is stolen from :iconalexiuss:
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh-oh, that could be trouble... hun (Colors789 that is), if you had permission to use the image add a reference so that the world doesn't freak out and hate on you, otherwise probably go without the picture if you didn't have permission (that's assuming the picture hasn't been published with a creative commons license or something... but I'm guessing people wouldn't be kicking up so much of a shitstorm in the comments if that was the case). You don't want that sort of trouble, right?

But nice poem anyway.
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sillyal Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
like it [link]
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:iconcolors789:
Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks Sillyal
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CHIBIHellequin Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I hope you got permission from Alexiuss to use his picture, even if this is a poem of your own work, its still art theft to use someone else's work as a thumbnail.

At least place a disclaimer in your description or a link to the original picture itself so people know who really took the effort to draw it.

[link]
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i didnt mean to. I didnt know. I credited him dont worry and i apologized
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tramzyt Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Picture is from alexiuss here on deviantart. Shame on you. Least you could do is add a reference !
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I didnt know. I am sorry. It was at night i was falling asleep. I didnt mean to and i apologized and credited him for the pic
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JesseWelshy Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I love the picture, its 100% awesome.
The poem is darn nice as well, by the way. I like it.
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you. the picture isnt mine. Alexiuss did the picture. I just wrote the poem
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enigmaticworld Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Picture is stolen.
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